Imagination #1: Space

Hover in the space among the crowds of stars

The intense silence is a pleasure

As its better

Than the silent roars

Of the demons, disguised with blood and flesh.


The coldness, the chill of death

A beautiful sensation of the vast magical place

It must embrace, before the frost bites

of those dirty teeth, and the cold licks

Of those shameless tongues break the peace.


Its where the time stops,

So get stuck in the black holes

No one’s here for love

No one’s for hate.


Get rid of the chaotic mind

And get drown into eternal sleep

Make it more peaceful

Cover the soul with the blanket

Made of stardust

Which is indeed more beautiful

Than millions of wreath

Your earthly grave would ever have.


@thisistapasi


A person known to me once said that I’m the “Queen of Imagination”. I don’t know why she mentioned this, but as she did, I tried to take it up at a level. Take this as a poem, or a random writing, whatever you want. But I want you all to feel yourself existing in the space, not in a space craft, but just like you’re floating. Let me know if this can bring imaginations on your mind too. Also let me know if you like my imaginations. Just let me know whatever you think about it:)

Sprinkle glitters on yourself and others, everyday!

 

 

 

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  1. I really like your imagination and like your this habit of not becoming foolish to your followers for only a number but just hearing their views , you write this imagination. I am very glad to see such a person like you !!!!โ˜บโ˜บ and A big thanks to you for following my blog and I am waiting for your feedback also. Have a Nice Day!!!!โ˜บ

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    1. Only people like you with a big heart can say such words. Yes, I need to hear from my followers how my writings on my imaginations are going. It’s the first one. Other imaginations will come soon. Thanks for following me back, your comment made the rest of my dayโ˜บ๐ŸŒน

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    1. And I was in really deep thoughts when I was writing the last part. Thank you for letting me know that my imaginations are worth being written.๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸŒน

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  2. I could really feel whatever is written in that poem! Really it was an amazing experience ๐ŸŒน also being a science student I should appreciate that scientific curve u gave to ur piece which adorned it very much! ๐Ÿ’ž

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    1. I’m a science student to but my field is biology. Astronomy was always one of my interests. Then I thought of mixing it up with these earthly emotions. I hope it came up well. Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’œ

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  3. I dont know how to begin with… feeling so lost after reading this! I was missing all these posts of yours!!
    The first part started so well and took me to a different level altogether! I love star-gazing and astronomy so this intrigued me even more! ๐Ÿ˜ The first five lines seemed to perfectly describe my feelings when i am lost looking at stars! So beautifully captured!!
    “The intense silence is a pleasure
    As its better
    Than the silent roars” โค
    The second part gave me chill and goosebumps esp the last two lines….
    The third part was comparatively lighter as if to prepare for the final part!
    And coming to the final part! It was mind blowing…!! I dont have enough words for it but can feel this so deeply! The tone changed suddenly and it looked as if you were really into it while writing this! You have squeezed so much in these few lines! I could imagine you lost in deep thoughts in your dark room while writing it…each line is wow! Could feel it…but i dont have words! …hats off to your imagination!! ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    1. I really enjoyed writing the last part of it..and was like overconfident that people would love this part too๐Ÿ˜›
      It feels good to have your beautiful long comments Sifar-difar ๐Ÿ˜Š. Missed you so much๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸŒน

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      1. Haha…the last part did look like the author really enjoyed writing it!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
        Thoroughly enjoyable!
        Thank you for liking my long comments!! I feel embarrassed about them sometimes ๐Ÿ™ˆ…
        I missed your posts too hence trying to check as many as i can. And my new name!! ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ‘ผ

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  4. Awesomely composed!
    ๐—–๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฐ๐—ธ ๐—ผ๐˜‚๐˜ ๐—บ๐˜† ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐˜„ ๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—น๐—ฒ ๐—ผ๐—ป ๐Ÿ’ ๐‘ป๐’‰๐’† ๐‘ฎ๐’“๐’†๐’‚๐’• ๐‘น๐’†๐’… ๐‘บ๐’‘๐’๐’• ๐’๐’‡ ๐‘ฑ๐’–๐’‘๐’Š๐’•๐’†๐’“ ๐ŸŒŒ
    https://unpluggedcreations.com/2017/08/18/the-great-red-spot-of-jupiter/

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